Stumbling Out Of 4:30

November 20, 2007

Four thirty, buddy stumbles out of the Cat Rental store looking dazed and beat up from the day. Carries a bag of tools and a backpack; head-to-toe Carhartt. Looks around confused, like someone knocked him with a question. Sees me waiting on the curb and walks on over with a laboured lumber. You waitin’ for the bus? Yep. This where ya catch it? To Westmount, I mean? Yessir. Know what time it comes by? ‘Bout another twenty minutes or so. Cool. Whips out his pack of Export A’s and lights up. Cocksucker of a day. Reamed out by the head push at 7 this morning, missed the truck. Lucky if I’m here next week. Plenty of work, man. I’m sure you’d find something – easy. Yeah. Maybe. How about you? Same shit as ever. Get up, grab the bus, go for eight hours, home, make sure the wife and kid are taken care of. Bastard, ain’t it? Humpin’ days on end with nothin’ to show but a few hundred. Stupid. It is man, I agree. Everyone busts their asses for what? It’s easy to forget the shit that’s important. Takes a drag, exhales to the smokestacks out east.

He doesn’t say anything for awhile and eventually wanders off, unceremoniously done with talking. Draws a final heavy from his smoke and lights up another right afterwards. He starts up a conversation with another bus waiter – this one in a tattered Yankees cap, denims and blue flannel. Sure I’ve got a smoke, here ya go. They choke back together and talk a bit; I can’t make out their words. Bit of a breeze kicks up and I adjust my collar, contemplate putting on my gloves. I hear the guy out of the corner of my ear, maybe referring to the tardy bus driver: Where is that fucker? Should have told him that the evening run is always shy. A few minutes later the bus pokes its nose ‘round the corner and starts towards us. Orange route marker looks like an invitation. We all get on – me last. I see the guy sink into a seat and take eight hours from his head to his knees. I go to the back and unzip my jacket. Guy’s hair is matted. Green pack of smokes aching to fall from his side pocket. I watch them all the way to the station.

Vignette #239

4 reader comments (closed)


Karen Bass

Fascinating vignette, Mike. The details you captured really made this guy come alive in my mind.

Nov 20, 2007 • 18:43


Adam Snider

Great bit here, Mike. Something oddly enchanting about the whole scene.

Others have said it before, but, now I’m going to say it: you should compile all of (or the best of) your “bus stories” into a manuscript. Definitely publishable, if you ask me.

Nov 21, 2007 • 00:41



Thanks for the feedback, guys. Always appreciated.

Nov 21, 2007 • 09:25



I’d like to second Adam’s book idea. I’d buy it for sure.

Nov 21, 2007 • 11:48

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