Forty Thousand Flakes

March 21, 2007

Of course, walking in a snowfall is a considered move. E-Town got a little shot of the late winter white last night and it would’ve been a shame to let it happen without some up-front examination. Just the right temp out here – a few degrees below zero. On the drive (Saskatchewan Drive – ed) tonight and downtown is cloaked in gray/white. Forty thousand little white notes fall from the sky and although we’ve had winter’s flat horn in our ears for the past five months, the dizzy white is a pleasure to see and feel. Sidewalks are treacherous booby traps. Bridge railings are salted. The ghostly image of the Rossdale plant lingers in the valley at the edge of perceptibility. I look up over the top of my glasses and catch a few flakes right in the eyeball. Feels damn good. The black jacket is collecting a layer of the stuff and the watchcap, the humble and under appreciated watchcap, has a nice coating on its ribbed wool surface.

Too late for after work, too early for late night cavorting, I pass a few other snow walkers, all decked in varying types of snow dress. The University girl with the black rims brushes white from her orange downfill. The middle aged guy kicks with head down, ass up determination. Older woman walks confidently in her woolen longcoat and lug-soled hiking shoes. Street lights have yet to come on around here, but with the snow tapering off I believe that I’ll miss the sight of flakes passing through the orange sodium of the streetside cobraheads. Small flashes that enter the light, move, and fade. A shame. That’s probably the best part of walking around when the snow is flying. When I get home, the watchcap is damp. I set it on the kitchen table, beside a lighter and a pack of gum with one piece missing.

Vignette #177

4 reader comments (closed)



What I like about this one is how the photo and the last line tie in. The question is, “what came first – the photo or the writing?”

In any case, a nice one.

Mar 21, 2007 • 08:32



Thanks, Handel! Always appreciated…

Mar 21, 2007 • 13:48


Nicole Pakan

“Forty thousand little white notes fall from the sky and although we’ve had winter’s flat horn in our ears for the past five months, the dizzy white is a pleasure to see and feel.”

This statement is amazing!!! Great job on this one!

Mar 22, 2007 • 11:38



Thanks, Nicole!

Mar 22, 2007 • 13:36

Notebook and pack of gum, March 2007

Notebook and pack of gum, March 2007



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